In paragraph 3, Mr. Abernathy's voice "sounded like a shovel scraping concrete." What does this comparison suggest?

Understand Words and Language Structures · TELPAS Grades 8–9 reading. The correct answer, and the reasoning behind it.

Reporting category 1: work out what words and phrases mean from context, and understand how sentences and word forms work.

Read the story. Then answer the questions.

The Ice Storm

The ice storm came on a Tuesday night, and by Wednesday morning our whole street in Denton had turned to glass. Every branch, every mailbox, every blade of grass wore a clear, hard coat. It was beautiful for about an hour. Then the power went out.

By afternoon, the house was so cold that I could see my breath in the kitchen. Mom wrapped my little brother, Theo, in two blankets on the couch. Our stove was electric, so we ate cold cereal for lunch and peanut butter sandwiches for dinner and pretended it was an adventure.

Across the street lived Mr. Abernathy. In the three years we had lived on Hackberry Lane, I had heard him speak maybe five times, usually to tell kids to stay off his lawn. His voice sounded like a shovel scraping concrete. I kept my distance.

On Thursday morning, someone knocked on our door. It was Mr. Abernathy.

"Saw your windows were dark last night," he said. "You folks have any heat?"

Mom admitted that we did not.

He nodded, as if that settled something. "I've got a gas stove and a fireplace. The Garzas and the Lees are already over. Bring the boy." He turned and walked carefully back across the ice before Mom could answer.

His living room was crowded and warm and smelled like pancakes. Mr. Abernathy stood at the stove, flipping pancakes with great seriousness. He did not say much, but he kept every plate full, and when Theo spilled syrup on the rug, he only shrugged and said, "Rugs wash."

The power came back on Friday afternoon. When we left, I thanked him, and he grunted, which I was beginning to understand was simply how he talked.

That spring, when my soccer ball rolled onto his lawn, I knocked on his door to ask for it instead of sneaking over to grab it. He handed it to me, and for the first time I could remember, he almost smiled.

The question

Choose the best answer.

In paragraph 3, Mr. Abernathy's voice "sounded like a shovel scraping concrete." What does this comparison suggest?

  • He spoke very softly.
  • He worked outside with tools.
  • His voice was rough and unfriendly.Correct answer
  • He talked often with his neighbors.

Why “His voice was rough and unfriendly.” is correct

This item tests a simile. A shovel scraping concrete makes a harsh, grating sound, so the narrator is saying his voice sounded harsh. Together with "I kept my distance," it shows the narrator found him unfriendly at first.

Why the other answers are wrong

  • He spoke very softly. — A shovel on concrete is loud and harsh, not soft.
  • He worked outside with tools. — The comparison is about his voice, not his work.
  • He talked often with his neighbors. — The paragraph says he spoke "maybe five times" in three years.

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